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good match for you? If there\u2019s something in particular about our offerings that attracts you, feel free to share that as well.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Word limit: 250 words, max.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h6 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Example #1<\/h6>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Numbers never lie, and with Duke\u2019s commitment to intellectual honesty, I know that I will feel at home in your institution. My interest in mathematics has been life-long, and from the time I was little and played with number-based toys, through my developing years applying math to music and music to math, I have allowed numbers to permeate my very way of life. Math is beautiful. It describes our universe and fills me with awe and wonder. It is because of this that I seek out unique experiences and understandings of mathematics, and novel approaches to the subject. Consequently, I have several reasons for wanting to study math at Duke.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The Lyceum is a concept that fascinates me. The idea of approaching the exploration of advanced mathematics through social interaction is strangely unique. I would think that more people would want this, but Duke has it. This forum would allow me to engage with my peers, my mentors, and those who have gone before and, when I am an older student, with first-year students as well \u2013 all of us learning together, from each other. What could be better than that?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Numbers don\u2019t lie, as I said, and Duke\u2019s high academic standard also means that my admission would truly mean something; acceptance from a discerning institution is valuable, indeed, and would provide a wonderful sense of accomplishment, while imbuing a sense of responsibility.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The Lyceum is one of my favorite concepts as a learning tool, and I itch to participate; I hope you will allow me that opportunity.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h6 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Example #2<\/h6>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The forty-two volunteer opportunities at the Duke University Medical Center was one of the first facets of Duke that drew me in. The DUMC student volunteer program offers diverse and enriching experiences for undergraduate students, especially those interested in pursuing medicine like myself. Digging deeper into what Duke has to offer its pre-medicine students, I am drawn to the rigorous courses as I thrive in academically challenging environments. Furthermore, the university\u2019s connections enable pre-medicine students to have meaningful experiences in professional workplaces, such as opportunities for shadowing. Shadowing is a key element that attracts me to Duke since it is an essential component in preparing for a health career. This opportunity is something that I value because it provides a realistic insight into the skills and proficiency needed in the professions, as well as an understanding of the numerous paths in health care.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Outside of experiences directed at pre-medicine students, Duke also offers a wide variety of activities and clubs to create a well-rounded atmosphere for their students. It is important to me to follow the hobbies and passions that lay outside of my educational focus, so I am excited to explore the variety of clubs and organizations. I have actively participated in traditional Indian dance and volunteered within my community for as long as I can remember, so it was exciting to find student groups within Duke committed to the passions I already have, such as Duke Dhamaka, Blue Devils United, and Environmental Alliance. I\u2019m looking forward to finding communities at Duke, both inside the classroom and out, to which I belong.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h6 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Example #3<\/h6>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">I am particularly interested in Duke\u2019s strong emphasis on interdisciplinary education. This unique learning environment will allow me to explore my varied interests, which include studying neuroscience and economics. I am interested in understanding the intersection between these fields, where I can gain insight into our human decision-making system. Engaging in Duke\u2019s renowned Center for Interdisciplinary Decision Science will allow me to collaborate and take part in neuroeconomics research under the guidance of the field\u2019s leaders and pioneers. I am specifically interested in the research of Dr. Huettel, who correlates quantitative behavioral data with neurobiology to reveal interesting analyses about human behavior. In the future, I hope to use my background in the social sciences and the interdisciplinary education from Duke to arm myself with a diverse set of skills to provide the highest quality of care in my career as a physician.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h6 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Example #4:<\/h6>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Duke students and professors exhibit curiosity, a love of learning and a contagious school spirit. I want to be a part of it. I was first drawn to this passion for learning and infectious school spirit when I attended the Duke Action Science Camp in fourth grade. During the camp, I was awed as I watched a professor\u2019s excitement as he made a reaction with calcium carbonate hot enough to cook on. I waded into a creek to observe all sorts of critters, got to extract DNA from a strawberry and even went to visit the lemurs. I was hooked! The action-packed camp ignited my love of learning for science and the arts.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">My decision to make Duke my home was made final by my visit last summer. My family spent the whole day exploring and talking to students on Duke\u2019s campus. While each student had a different story, they all shared the same passion. Every student emphasized the diversity of the student body, the collaborative nature of the community, and&nbsp;each student&nbsp;we spoke to shared the same excitement that I remembered that science professor having all those years ago. Duke provides the academic challenges, collaborative environment, and impassioned, curious community that I am looking for.&nbsp; Having been a Stanton Blue Devil for the last four years,&nbsp;I am ecstatic about the possibility of becoming a blue devil for another four years!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h6 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><a><\/a>Optional Essays<\/h6>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Duke emphasizes that these questions are optional for&nbsp;all&nbsp;2023 applicants and notes the following:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">\u201cFeel free to answer them if you believe that doing so will add something meaningful that is not already shared elsewhere in your application. Four optional questions are available \u2013 a maximum of two can be selected. Please select 0\u20132 optional essay topics.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Word limit: 250 words, max. per essay<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>Optional Essay No. 1: \u201cWe seek a diverse student body that embodies the wide range of human experience. In that context, we are interested in what you\u2019d like to share about your lived experiences and how they\u2019ve influenced how you think of yourself.\u201d<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">My parents got divorced, and I know that that\u2019s the oldest story in the book at this point, but this family schism \u2013 at first traumatizing and upsetting for me and my siblings \u2013 became a very important aspect of my life and shaped my worldview into what I think is a unique perspective.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">My family is biracial, with my Black mom and white dad starting a family together. Although they parted ways, both sides of my heritage have remained intact, and I feel like I get two perspectives. We live in a racially charged world, and my experiences and sympathies allow me to understand the many facets that go along with current conversations about race.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">These divided perspectives are what has motivated me to study history; I hear the old saying, \u201cHistory is written by the victors,\u201d and I want to find the different forgotten branches of history. My essay, \u201cSlipstream Archives: A Look into Past Perspectives,\u201d won first prize in an essay competition, including a scholarship.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">I believe that this success could not have come without a final puzzle piece in my family. When my mother remarried, it was to a rabbi and Talmudic scholar. This \u201cthird culture\u201d made me interested in dialectic and challenging worldviews. My place as captain of the debate team and my essay\u2019s multifaceted viewpoints are owed to my stepdad.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Divorce can be messy, but I have come to love my ever-branching family tree, for the love, support, and traditions it has granted me.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>Another example:<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">I was just trying to buy a Sprite and pay my hundred rupees. The cashier was starting to look as hassled as I felt, speaking urgently in a language I couldn\u2019t understand. We were both frustrated and the cashier stormed off to another counter and grabbed a plate from under it. At this point, I\u2019m thinking \u201cWhy would I need a plate for my Sprite?\u201d Normally at shops, the employees know enough English, and I can understand the gist of the Tamil words with my own Telugu background. This time, we were both extremely confused. Eventually, after non-verbal communication and pointing, I realized she was supposed to offer me a free plate with my Sprite because of a deal.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Most people are surprised to learn that moving to India was a huge adjustment for me even though I\u2019m Indian. Yet, considering I was moving to a country I never lived in, a state whose language I don\u2019t speak, and a culture I\u2019m not fully part of, it has been a definite challenge. From the language barrier to the culture change, and even the conservative manners and customs, I have had to adapt to a new way of living. All of that and living in a country that is different culturally and socially from the United States gave me a new perspective of viewing my place in the world. I am confident that these experiences will help me make the community at Duke even more inclusive and understanding of differences.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>Another Example:<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Growing up in a Sindhi Indian family, I was brought up following unique cultural traditions of music, art, and dance. However, one of my favorite parts of my upbringing revolves around baking Sindhi desserts like khorak, majoon, and khus-khus seero. I have vivid memories of beautiful Saturday afternoons that my mom and I spent baking these sweets, filling the room with a brilliant aroma. I remember slowly gaining an appreciation for the patience, care, and subtle attention needed to cook these deserts.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">These dry fruit desserts, traditionally baked in India, are used to celebrate important and beautiful occasions, such as weddings and holidays. My family and Sindhi community, however, also use them to remember and enjoy the often overlooked moments in life, aiming to spread joy and happiness to those who eat them. Through eating these desserts alone, I often see smiles from my family members, as they reminisce about their earlier joyful memories of relishing these sweets with their loved ones, celebrating life\u2019s beautiful moments.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">At Duke, not only do I hope to bake these deserts for others, but I also look forward to embracing new traditions from other students excited to share aspects of their cultural identity. Overall, I hope to use these sweets to share at least a snippet of my culture with the Duke community. With every small progress that I may make with my peers at Duke, I hope to share this beautiful emphasis on celebration that I have gained from my Sindhi cultural upbringing.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>Optional Essay No. 2: \u201cWe believe there is benefit in sharing and sometimes questioning our beliefs or values; who do you agree with on the big important things, or who do you have your most interesting disagreements with? What are you agreeing or disagreeing about?\u201d<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">I was frustrated, and I was angry, and I was sure I was about to literally be excommunicated. My conversations with Fr. Donough could get heated, but they never resulted in an angry, critical rant, which was what I unleashed before treading out of the room.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">My favorite debate partner is Fr. Donough. I came to him when I was younger, with many questions about the church. I was questioning everything, and I wanted somebody to give me answers. In a display of generosity, and faith \u2013 in me if not in the church \u2013 Fr. Donough didn\u2019t give me answers \u2013 certainly not easy ones \u2013 but encouraged me to keep studying.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">We had many talks over the years, but one instance, as I mentioned, led to my being very angry. I had heard about the church\u2019s scandals, and I had confronted Fr. Donough about them. My anger was not with him, but with the whole gestalt of the bad situation. Nevertheless, I was frustrated by Fr. Donough\u2019s adherence to what I perceived as an entirely corrupt organization.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Fortunately, it didn\u2019t end there. Our next conversation was more civil, and we discussed these big issues at length. Fr. Donough encouraged me to be the change I wanted to see, and I started up a donation fund for victims, as well as a student lobby group to petition the Vatican for change. Fr. Donough supports us through it all.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">I have no finer debate partner to agree and disagree with than Fr. Donough.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>Optional Essay No. 3: \u201cWhat has been your best academic experience in the last two years, and what made it so good?\u201d<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Most teachers who taught me talked a big game about wanting students to engage in debate, or \u201cdialectic\u201d as they called it, and to challenge their ideas. In my experience, most of this was a fabrication. The best essay grades and participation marks were found through parroting what was dictated from on high. Did the teacher think such-and-such is the \u201ccorrect\u201d interpretation of a novel? You did, too, or you lost points.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">None of that was true for Ms. Jackie Winters. The first essay I sent her came back with the note, \u201cThis doesn\u2019t sound like you; it sounds like me.\u201d I asked her about the note, and this initiated a marvelous learning environment, in which I grew faster than I ever have in any other class.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Discussions were lively, and the more I presented my authentic views, the more I was respected. My grades were dependent on being backed up by rhetoric, sources, and logic, not by compliance. Due to this engagement, this was the most enjoyable English literature class I had, and I feel like my viewpoints were challenged. I learned to question my ideas and dig into a text for the best results.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Best of all, I was putting in more and more effort to find good, quality sources to back up my arguments. I was held to a high standard and shown respect, and I believe that those qualities made for the best learning environment possible.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>Optional Essay No. 4: \u201cDuke\u2019s commitment to diversity and inclusion includes sexual orientation, gender identity, and gender expression. If you\u2019d like to share with us more about your identity in this context, feel free to do so here.\u201d<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">I just don\u2019t fit in, and I have gotten used to that now, but I have often felt like an outcast\u2019s outcast, and I have sometimes wished things were different for me. At first, I thought I was gay. But I discovered the word \u201cbisexual\u201d and that idea resonated with me.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">I was already part of the gay-straight alliance at my school, and I was involved in and organized several efforts to fundraise for anti-bullying campaigns. It took a while to come out to my family, and they had only just started to accept the label of \u201chomosexual\u201d when I dropped \u201cbisexual\u201d on them, and my world flipped again.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The problem was that, as much as I could be bullied for my sexuality, I at least had friends in the gay-straight alliance. Coming out as bisexual, however, I discovered that even in the GSA, many people aren\u2019t sanguine about the idea of an \u201cin-between place\u201d; members of the LGBTQ community also reject bisexuals. This is uncomfortable, but true.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Losing support networks was a theme of my high school years, but I would do it all again in a heartbeat. I have learned the value of friendship and who my truest friends are, and I have campaigned and fought against bullying and made a difference at my high school. Not fitting in can be hard, but sometimes it is necessary for real, positive change, and I want to be an agent for positive change in my life and in the world.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>COVID Impact Essay: \u201cThe Common and Coalition Applications* will also include a section for students to disclose if they were impacted by community disruptions such as natural disasters and COVID-19.\u201d<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The art on the wall hung without enjoyment, with nobody coming in to see it anymore. Passers-by glanced inside, but with no events and no hosting, the gallery space was empty, cold, and ineffective. It couldn\u2019t bring together artists and appreciators, host classes, or provide a space for yoga or fundraising events. 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I got a part-time job to help with the household budget, which cut into studying hours.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">This required sacrifice, discipline, and hard work, and although rewarding, it made my time during the lockdowns difficult and stressful. The re-opening of the gallery doors let fresh air into our lives in more ways than one. I\u2019m glad we are through the worst, and I look forward to a bright future.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h6 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><a><\/a>General Essay Writing Tips and Tips for Duke\u2019s Essays<\/h6>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">You will be writing in a standard essay format: opening paragraph, body, conclusion. 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Again, you are constrained by the word limit, and you don\u2019t have room to add a lot of detail.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Try to pack in some reflection on how you have grown as a person or student due to each event you discuss. The prompt can be answered, plus you can allude to academic achievements or some other accomplishments that the admissions committee will take a closer look at on your resume.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Your conclusion should focus on wrapping up the essay and summarizing anything set up in the opening paragraph. However, as noted, your conclusion should also make the committee want to hear more from you; give them someone they would want to meet in an interview.&nbsp;How to write a college essay&nbsp;can be tricky but following these steps will already get you headed in the right direction.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Remember to edit and refine! 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